Dear Lord.

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Classic Gonzossm

Interesting. Nothing really original, but was a good time waster. Needs to be improved with additional enemy types. At the moment, gameplay gets stale after the first 30 seconds or so. It'll be interesting to see where this goes.

Why?

Last game was great, new game looks like it has a metric FUCKTON of potential. Really excited to see it developed.

The reel's waayyy too long in terms of industry standards. Try to shorten up the scenes. With demos you typically want to show more dramatic range, but it seems the *announcer* type voice is your bread and butter which is fine. You get surprisingly decent quality out of that snowball. It sounds a little like you're using Audacity noise removal though. Try other DAWs like Reaper (comes with an indefinite free trial).

Great reel! Shows decent range. A little on the longer side, but acceptable. Mixing's a little spotty in some places and jarring on the ears, but other wise alright! Keep it up!

At the beginning, just your name is fine, no introductions needed. Lots of background noise, try to record either in a better space or try to gate it out in post. Try to avoid adding effects onto your voice in post, it doesn't show what *you* can do as a voice actor necessarily. Your audio peaks wayyyy too fucking much, that's an *absolute* no go for most projects. Most people will stop listening as soon as they hear clipping. Try to keep the reel under 60 seconds. You've got a few similar character archetypes/voices, try to show more variation.